Feedback Please

Hi,

My idea is to start a training company primarily for young people, but also offering hrlp for disabled people, as I am disabled myself and use Direct Payments. I am currently on week five of start your bussiness and am at the brain storming stage, I have put my ideas on a power point, which I will attach, and if you ccould give me as much feedback as you can, for the Brain storming I would be greatful.
Many Thanks, for looking,
Gemma Blagbrough